Saturday, March 1, 2014

Still Morning Chill

 I'm not a poet, except perhaps by a technicality of having written what I'm calling a poem just now.  This idea and imagery was inspired by comments made over coffee this morning with my folks about the crisp and almost eerily still morning we all walked out into.  So I thought I'd try to convey the scene in a couple stanzas of verse.

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Still, so still
And quiet, but not just quiet
No sound at all
Bringing me to a halt
As my crunching footsteps
Seem blasphemous
In such a sanctuary

White, pure white
And unbroken, smooth undulation
Of pristine landscape
Bringing a teary squint
To slow-adjusting eyes
Freezing in place
Lest it crash to the earth

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